Hi!
Your idea to use a long wire to connect pin 9 to VCC is very bad.
It can be like this for two wires in parallel:
Or like this to single wire.
Two wires in parallel is better because the maximum current for a 22 AWG is 920 mA and for 26 AWG is 370 mA.
This schematic is valid only to 2 or 3 wires fan.
Best regards.